Azhagu serial - Magesh - Poorna fan fiction - Episode 16 - 23/08/2018

For couple of days, Poorna was actively eating to gain weight. She ignored the hateful stares from Ravi and Azhagu. Poorna and Magesh were communicating on and off through text messages. She didn't want to call him again. Magesh didn't call her because he wants Poorna to miss him and he wants her realize that. Vasantha was arranging for "Thaali pirichu kokura" function for Poorna and she called Magesh to invite him. Magesh agreed to take couple of days holidays around a weekend. Azhagu argued the function should happen for both Sudha and Poorna side by side. But Vasantha didn't agree for it. Vasantha said "En ponnuku thaniya thaan nadakanum, venuna avaluku vera oru naal pannikonga". Meanwhile Azhagu happened to witness something happened between Ravi and Sudha in the upstairs. Ravi and Sudha bumped into each other and Ravi held Sudha from falling. Ravi was lost in the beauty of Sudha for a minute and he brought her close to him and tried to kiss her not intentionally, but at the heat of the moment. Sudha pushed him away and yelled at him "Enna Ravi ithellam?". 

Ravi felt bit embarrassed. "Sorry Sudha, athu..."

"Cha, yen ungaluku buthi ipdi pochu?"

Ravi's prestige got hurt and he became defensive. "Ippo enna aagiduchunu ivlo kovama pesura? Yetho antha moment-la teriyama nadantha vishayam thaana?"

"Teriyama nadantha vishayama? Apdina naama epdi rendu perum ore room-la irukkarthu? Intha madiri teriyama neenga vera yedhavathu panniteenganna?"

"Pothum niruthu Sudha, enakkum maaanam rosham ellam irukku, oru vishayatha maranthutu pesura, naan unakku thaali kattina purushan, athuvum summa illa, naan 25 varusham love pannina ponna vittu kuduthutu unakku vazhkkai kuduthavan maranthudatha".

Sudha laughed "Enna soneenga? 25 varusham love pannina ponna vittu kuduthutu thaali kattineengala? paravalla Ravi, innaikavathu itha pathi pesuneengale, aana 25 varusham neenga avala love pannina madiriye teriyalaye, panniruntha onnu en kazhuthula thaali katti irukka mateenga, apdi illama unmaiyave neenga thiyagam panratha ninachu unga love-a vittu kuduthu iruntheenganna Poorna kitta manaasar mannippu ketrupeenga, intha rendula ethu Ravi unga unmaiyana mugam?"

Ravi smirked "Yen pesa maata Sudha? Unakku thaali kattitu naan ellaroda thittayum vaangitu iruken illa, yen pesa maata?"

Sudha said "Sorry Ravi, naan ungala hurt pannanunu pesala".

"Pinna vera ethukaaga pesuniyaam?"

"Neenga unmaiya irukanunu pesuren"

"Unakku naan unmaiya thaana irukken, thaali kattina nimishathula irunthu naan Poorna-va ninachu kooda paathathu illaiye"

"Ravi neenga enakku unmaiya irukka vendam, ungaluku neenga unmaiya irunga, naan sonnenu Poorna kitta poi mannipu keteenga, yen athu ungalukka thonala? Yen-na onnu 25 varusham neenga poi-ya Poorna-va love pannirukanum, illana kutti paiyanukaga mattum thaan en kazhuthula thaali kattinatha soneengale, athu poi-ya irukkanum, ethu unmai-nu neenga enakku solla vendam, ungaluku neengale solli paarunga, yenna intha kudumbathula thaan naan vaazha poren, ungaluku pondatti aagama naan kaalatha otta mudiyunnu neengalum naanum ninacha athu muttaal thanam, innaiku nadantha madiri namakulla neraiya moments varum, appo ellam ungala neengale marakkalam, yen naan kooda ennai naane ungakitta izhakkalam, yenna after all, we are humans, aana oru unmaiyana-varkitta thaan ennai naan kuduthen-nu ninachu naan santhosha padura madiri antha moments irukkanum, athuku neenga unga past-a konjam thiruppi paarunga, ethu unmaiyana Ravi-nu yosichu paarunga, athukappuram ungaluku enna mudivu edukka thonutho, antha mudiva thairiyama edunga, naanum atha accept pannikuren, athu varaikum maranthum kooda ennai thottudatheenga, apram naan amaithiya irukka maten". 

Sudha left that place. When Ravi turned back, he saw Azhagu standing there. His eyes got wet. "Paatheengala ma, ivalukaga naan ellarkittayum asinga patten, aana iva ennai asinga paduthittu pora". 

"Nee feel pannatha Ravi, avakitta naan pesuren, avaluku antha Poorna-va paathu guiltya feel panra, naan evlavo avakitta solli paathuten, kekura madiri teriyala"

"Antha Poorna-vum appapo vanthu Sudha manasa kalachittu poidura ma"

"Yen pa, recenta yedhavathu sonnala?"

"Amam ma, annaiku vanthu Surendhar veetula illathapo Ravi un veetuku vanthirukaara? apdi ipdi-nu asingama pesittu poita ma, athanala thaan Sudha enmela ipdi veruppa pesuraanu ninakiren"

"Nee yen Ravi itha munnadiye enkitta sollala, antha Poorna panrathu romba thappu pa, naan avala kandichu vachirupen illa, sari irukattum, neram kidaikkum pothu Poorna-va kandichu avaluku budhi solli avala naan thiruthuren, athu varaikum nee ethuvum feel pannama iru, Sudha manasu maari unkooda vaazhuva, nee varutha padama iru"

"Sari ma" left Ravi. 

Magesh asked Vasantha not to tell Poorna about his arrival. Poorna was asking Vasantha "Yen ma, thaali pirichu kokura function-na avarum irukkanum thaana?".

Vasantha tried to control her smile and with a straight face she said "Apdi ellam onnum illaiye, nee iruntha pothum, ithu enna pombalainga function, athuku ethuku Magesh irukkanum?"

"Illa ma, naan serial-la ellam paathiruken, usuala husband and wife ukkara vachu thaan function pannuvanga"

"Serial-la nadakarthellam unmaiya sollu, ithukellam Magesh vara vendiya avasiyam illa, epdiyum avan vanthalum avankitta nee vallu vallu nu erinju vizhuva, athuku avan anga nimmadhiya velai seiyattum"

Poorna got bit disappointed, but then she kind of convinced herself "Magesh vantha enna, varalanna enna? Namma nokkame intha Ravi-Sudhava hurt panrathu thaan, aana antha velaiya naama paakarthe illa, antha Sudha vera annaiku feel panni mannippu kettuta, avala enna solli naama hurt panrathu, cha, onnum puriyala, ore kuzhappama irukku, ava mannippu ketta enna? Ravi pannina thappuku Ravi-yayavathu naama hurt pannanum. Aana epdi panrathunu thaan teriyala." Poorna felt bit bored with all these revenge things to be honest. 

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  1. Unknown23 August 2018 at 16:34

    Super

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    1. Yazhini Shiva24 August 2018 at 21:40

      Thank you unknown. Your continuous support encourages me.

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    2. Rups26 August 2018 at 07:04

      I love Sudha in your story 😂😂👍

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    3. Yazhini Shiva26 August 2018 at 11:34

      Thanks Rups. Because in my opinion, at least Sudha showed some remorse for her actions, Ravi and Azhagu are more cruel towards Poorna than Sudha. Moreover, I always believe women are not as cruel as they are shown in serials. And if women can understand each other and support each other, we can truly come up in life and that will be real women empowerment. So it will run through in my story like an invisible thread. Thanks for your comment as it shows my characterisation of Sudha didn't go unnoticed. :-)

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