Azhagu serial - Magesh - Poorna fan fiction - Episode 48 - 20/05/2019
Poorna couldn't sit still for more than an hour. Although she was feeling light headed, she came downstairs to help Sudha and Azhagu. Sudha thought "Velai seiyya vendannu sonnalum kekka maata, aalum tireda irukka, Mahesh vera paathuka sollitu poirukkaru, ippo ivala epdi velai seiyyama thadukkarthu?". Sudha thought of an idea and said "Poorna nee konjam Appu-va paathukiriya?"
P: Yen? Appu paatuku vilayadittu thaana irukkan, naan vena intha kaai ellam narukki kuduthutu poi paathukiren
S: Illa Poorna, avanukku innoru pallu mulaikkuthu pola irukku, keezha ethu kidanthalum apdiye eduthu vaaila vachu kadikka paakuran, athaan nee konjam avanoda play pannitu iruntha naan seekirama velaiya mudichutu vanthu avana paathupen
Poorna was also feeling tired and she always feel happy to play with Appu. So she said "Mm sari Sudha, naan poi avanoda vilayaduren".
Poorna started to play with Appu and noticed him picking up everything and put it in his mouth. So she had to divert him and gave him the toys for teething. After 15 mins or so, she started to feel dizzy. She drank some water and tried to concentrate on Appu. She couldn't be active with Appu but she made sure he didn't put anything unwanted in his mouth. Once Sudha came after cooking, she got up to go to her room. Sudha stopped her.
S: "Poorna un roomku poriya?"
P: "Amam"
S: "Oru nimisham, intha soupa kudichutu po"
P: "Enna romba naal kazhichu innaiku soup panni irukka?"
S: "Just pannanunu thonuchu"
S: "Poorna un roomku poriya?"
P: "Amam"
S: "Oru nimisham, intha soupa kudichutu po"
P: "Enna romba naal kazhichu innaiku soup panni irukka?"
S: "Just pannanunu thonuchu"
Poorna had the soup and went upstairs. She sat on the bed and turned on the tv with her remote. She has no idea when she went to sleep. Sudha knocked on the door couple of times, since there was no answer, she opened the door and saw Poorna sleeping. Sudha brought her lunch. Since she knows Poorna is not feeling well, she thought it is important that she doesn't miss her afternoon meal. So she tried to wake up Poorna.
S: "Poorna ezhunthiri"
Poorna woke up and got surprised to see Sudha brought her lunch. "Yen Sudha, naan keezha vanthu saptuka maatena? Enakku mattum ethuku intha special treatment?"
S: "Special treatment ellam onnum illa, chumma bore adichuthu enakku, athaan unkooda pesilannu vanthen, lunch time ngarthala unakku lunch-um eduthutu vanthen"
Poorna thought this is the first time Sudha came to her room to spend some time with her.
P: "Sari ukkaru"
S: "TV la enna odittu irukku?"
P: "Chumma lifehacks paathutu irunthen apdiye thoongiten"
S: "Enna channel ithu?"
P: "Ithu youtube, chromecast-la tv yoda connect panni paakuren"
S: "Oh apdi lam irukka? Enakku theriyathu, sari nee sapidu"
P: "Enakku actuala soup saptathukkapuram pasiye illa Sudha, naan apram saptukiren"
S: "Unakku pasi edukka thaan antha soup, ippo sapidu, naan amma, yen Appu kooda saptutan, nee thaan innum sapidala"
Poorna thought to herself "Sapidalana vida maata pola irukku". Poorna started to eat the food unwillingly. Sudha accompanied her by talking some random topics to make sure that she finishes her meal. After Poorna had her lunch, Sudha and Poorna were talking for 15 mins or so about a tv show, then Sudha left her to take rest.
Mahesh returned from work around 4pm and saw Poorna sleeping. He tried to wake her up. "Poorna, Poorna..."
"Mmm..." responded Poorna.
"Ezhunthiri, ezhunthiri...." Mahesh pulled the blanket and switched off the ac in an effort to wake up Poorna.
Poorna opened her eyes half and mumbled "Enna Mahesh, thoonga vida mateengala?"
M: "Mmhmmm vida maten, ezhunthirichu kilambu, Dr kitta poganum"
P: "Ethuku? Enakku thaan onnum illaiye?"
M: "Athai Dr sollatum, nee kilambu da"
P: "Oru chinna thalai suthaluku poi yen ipdi aarbattam panreenga?"
M: "Oii.....en pondattikku onnuna naan arbattam pannama vera yaar pannuva?"
Poorna got up and looked at him. "Enmela ivlo anbu irukka ungalukku?"
M: "Ithenna kelvi? illaiya pinna?"
P: "Aana enkitta opena pesa matengureengale?"
Mahesh got frustrated and sighed. "Poorna oru thadavai sonna unakku puriyatha?
P: "Apdi enna perusa solliteenga? Issues irukku-nu soneenga, aana athu ennanu mattum enkitta solla mateenga? Apram ethukku naan oruthi wife-nu inga ukkanthiruken, ungaluku sapadu katti kudukkavum, ungalukku aasai vantha......" Poorna slowed down seeing Mahesh getting angry.
Mahesh got away from her and went to balcony. His left hand is on his waist, his right hand rubbing his forehead. Its obvious for Poorna that he is angry and tensed. She regretted starting the argument with him when he came from office to take her to the hospital. She felt she could have waited as he asked her to or if not, she could have waited until they return from the hospital.
She got up and refreshed herself, combed her hair and looked at Mahesh. He is sitting in a chair in the balcony. He joined his hands together and rested his head on his hands. "Ayyo paavam romba tensiona irukkaru polave, apdina enkitta share pannalam thaana? Ethuva irunthalum pesina konjam reliefa irukkum thaana?" thought Poorna. When she got up from the dressing table chair, she started to feel dizzy. She caught hold of the chair and made sure she doesn't fall.
She went to him slowly and said "Naan ready".
Mahesh didn't turn to see her for couple of minutes. Then he looked at her and got up. She followed him. He turned around and told her "Ingaye wait pannu, naan poi anniya ready aaga solren".
Poorna became confused "Ethukku?"
"Anniyoda hospital poitu vaa" said Mahesh.
Tears started to gather in the corner of Poorna's eyes, but she controlled herself and said "Apdina naan pogala".
M: "Yen?"
P: "Neenga thaana kooptutu porenu soneenga, neengale kootitu ponga"
M: "Enakku tireda irukku, nee anniyodaye poitu vaa"
Poorna became angry and started to remove the pin from her saree from her shoulder and started to unwrap her saree.
Mahesh grabbed her hand and stopped her from removing her saree and asked "Ippo yen sareeya ellam kazhattura?"
P: "Athu thaan neenga kooptutu poga matennu solliteenga illa? Naan vera yedhavathu casual saree kattikuren"
M: "Apdina anniyoda poitu vara maata?"
P: "Mmhmm maaten"
Mahesh sighed and said "Vanthu tholai".
P: "Enna soneenga? Vanthu tholaiya? Ennai paatha avlo ilakkarama poiducha ungalukku?"
M: "Nee mattum ennai paathu enna sonna?"
P: "Enna sonnen?"
M: "Athukulla maranthutiya? Athaana, pesarthukku munnadi 10 thadava yosichu pesurvangaluku naama enna pesinonnu nabagam irukkum, yosikkama pesuravangaluku ipdi thaan pattu pattunu maranthu poidum, enakku aasai varum pothu ellam theethukkava wife-nu thaana kekka vantha nee?"
Poorna lowered her eyes.
M: "Sollu, sonniya illaiya? Vanthu tholai-nu sonnale unakku ivlo kovam varuthe, chance kidaikkum pothellam aasaiku varen, alpa thanama panrenu solriye, enakku evlo hurt aagum? Inimel ipdiye vachuko, aasaiku thaan varen, en wife thaana nee? en anbu ellam theriyala illa unakku? en aasai mattum thaana theriyuthu? So apdiye vachuko, naan aasaikku thaan varen, enna thappu? Ishtam-na neeyum enjoy pannu, illana vendam sollu, pothuma? santhoshama?" Mahesh yelled at her face.
Tears rolled down through Poorna's cheeks.
M: "Cha, naanum kova pada koodathu, kova pada koodathunnu paakuren, aana nee vitta thaana? Tho...azha arambichita illa? Azhu, athuku mattum readya water tank vachiru kannulaye, innaiku hospital poitu unkooda velila saptutu jollya time spend pannalannu seekiram vanthen illa, enakku ithu thevai thaan" Mahesh sat down on the bed in tension.
Poorna started to weep and went to the other side of the bed, sat and cried. Nearly 30 mins would have gone. Mahesh got up and looked at her angrily and started to unbutton his shirt. Poorna went to him and got hold of his hand and stopped him from unbuttoning his shirt. "Sorry" she said.
M: "Pchh...kaiya vidu Poorna, un sorry ellam neeye vachuko" Mahesh continued to unbutton his shirt.
Poorna didn't free his hand.
Mahesh mobile rang. Both of them looked at the mobile which was on the bed. Poorna saw the number and knew it is that girl's number. She freed Mahesh's hand, Mahesh took his mobile, disconnected the call and switched off the mobile. He looked at Poorna who was facing away from him.
M: "Ippo hospital polama vendama?"
P: "Ungaluku call vanthuche, pesalaya?"
M: "Pesala, hospital variya varalaiya?"
Poorna was silent for couple of minutes and adjusted her saree fleet, took her hand bag and said "mm pogalam".
Poorna usually hold Mahesh's shoulder or hip when they travel in the bike, but today she didn't even touch him. Mahesh is also not yearning for her touch, he is still hurt by her words. They reached the hospital, got the appointment which had 30 mins of waiting time approximately. Both of them were sitting in silent for a while. Then Mahesh asked "unakku tea yedhavathu vangittu varava?"
P: Vendam
Mahesh didn't bother her after she said no. He was walking back and forth in the hospital corridor. When Poorna's token number came up, Mahesh joined her.
Dr: Sollunga enna problem?
P: Konjam dizzya irukku Dr
M: Nethu evening romba neram kitchenla work pannitu iruntha, apram thideernu romba sweat aaga arambichiduchu, breathing ellam fast and shallowa irunthuchu, apram apdiye mayakkam pottu vizhunthutta
Dr: Ithuku munnadi ipdi irunthirukka?
P: Illa Dr
M: Konja naal munnadi anaemic a iruntha, but ipdi mayakkam vanthathilla
Dr: Intha two days a thaan ipdi dizzya irukka?
M: Amam Dr
P: Illa Dr, last 10 daysave light headeda irukkum
Mahesh was surprised to hear that. He thought to himself "Cha work tension, intha Manthra issue-nala Poornavuku 10 daysa dizzya irukkartha kooda gavanikkala".
Dr checked Poorna's blood pressure and heart beat and said "BP low-a irukku ma, heart palpitation vera irukku, oru blood test eduthudalam, yenna anaemic-a irunthangannu solreenga, so blood cell count paathudalam, tablets ezhuthi tharen, baby-ku try panreengala?"
Mahesh and Poorna both got taken by that question and looked at each other and didn't know what to say. Poorna lowered her eyes.
Mahesh looked at her and started to speak up. "Athu, naan Kodaikanal-a work panren Dr, so we don't try actively, but we don't use any protection when we do have sex".
Dr: Mmm...eppo ma lasta un period vanthuchu?
Mahesh became curious to know the reason behind the question.
Poorna hesitated a bit as she and Mahesh never talked about these kind of things and haven't even shared time with him when she got her periods. In the first few months of their marriage, as they didn't become close, they didn't get to talk about these things, then later on although they became intimate, Mahesh was in Kodaikanal most of the time.
Mahesh nudged her and encouraged her to speak up.
Dr: Mm sollu ma, regulara varum thaana? Illa irregular periodsa?
P: Athu....marriage munnadi regulara thaan Dr irunthuchu, mostly 28-30 daysla vanthudum, but marriage ku apram irregulara irukku, sometimes 40 days kooda aagum, lasta eppo vanthuchunnu naan maranthuten
Dr: Athellam correcta note pannanum ma, neenga active-a try pannalannalum kooda protection use panrathu illanu solreenga, so baby form aaga chance irukku, periods vera irregular solreenga, so ethanala thalli poi irukkunu guess panrathu ungaluku kashtam aagidum, neenga anaemic-a irukka chance irukkarthala suppose baby conceive aana it is a risk for both the fetus and you. So inimel period correcta date note pannikonga, healthya sapidunga, ippo oru urine test pannidalam conceive aagi irukeengalannu check panrathuku.
Dr started to write the tests name. Mahesh's face became bright and Poorna noticed it. "Enna ithu? Mayakkam-nu vantha Dr ithellam solranga, oru velai naan conceive aagi iruppena?" Poorna blushed and she felt butterflies in her stomach.
Dr: Itha velila irukka labla kudunga, they will give you container for the urine test. Apram blood test kum ezhuthi irukken, urine test kuduthutu wait pannunga, I'll call you.
M: Mmm ok Dr
Poorna could see the brightness in Mahesh's face. "Oru velai conceive-a irukkomunu sonnathuke ipdi 1000 volts bulb eriyuthe avar mugathula? But apdi conceive aagi irukka chance irukkuma?"
Lab Technician: Madam restroom intha side irukku
Poorna got the container for the urine test. Once she gave the urine and blood for the tests, she sat next to Mahesh. They didn't speak with each other.
Mahesh took the water bottle and offered it to her. "Thanni kudikiriya?"
"Mmm kudunga"
Dr called them both. Both of them were curious and nervous about the result.
Dr: Pregnancy test negative thaan ma, but unakku date vera theriyala-nu solra, so ethukum nee konjam care eduthuko, innum one week la period varalanna thirumba oru test eduthukalam, home test kooda pannikalam neenga, anyhow, bp-ku tablets ezhuthi irukken, neraiya thanni kudikanum, electrolytes kudikkanum, thoongi ezhunthirikkum pothu konjam slow-a ukkanthu, slow-a ezhunthu nikkanum, low bp irukkum pothu avasaram avasaram-nu bed-a vittu ezhunthirikka koodathu, anaemic-a irukeengalanu blood test result vantha piragu theriyum, then I will prescribe you for that if needed. Stress irukka ma unakku? Stress illama irukkanum, athanala kooda periods irregulara irukka chance irukku. Eat healthy, do some exercises or yoga. It will help to regularize your periods. Both of you are young, so lifestyle habits sari panninale you have good chance to become pregnant. Okva?
Dr smiled.
M: Thanks Dr
P: Thanks Dr
Poorna was bit upset. Mahesh bought the tablets from the pharmacy. Mahesh took Poorna to a little restaurant around the corner.
M: Enna sapidura?
P: Enakku avlova pasikala
M: Paravalla sapidu, first oru soup kudi, mathathu apram order pannikalam
Mahesh ordered soup for both of them.
M: Yen ippo dulla irukka?
P: Onnum illa
M: Paravalla sollu
P: Pregnancy test negative-a vanthathula ungaluku kashtama illaiya?
M: Dr kitta vara varaikkum naama itha pathi perusa ethuvum plan pannavo, pesavo illaiye, just to be safe, Dr test edukka sonnanga, avlo thaan, ithuku ethuku upset aaganum?
But Poorna couldn't be cool like Mahesh. Yes he is right that they never talked about baby and all, but the feeling she felt when Dr suggested to take a test is something she had never felt in her life. It stirred something into her. Mahesh didn't disturb her run of thoughts by chatting, he let her to be in her thoughts. Once they had the soup, Mahesh asked what she would like to eat. She is not interested in eating anything. But Mahesh insisted that she should. So she had idly and medhu vada while Mahesh had dosa.
Both of them didn't talk much on their way back. They reached the home and everyone was having dinner.
Pazhani: Vaa Mahesh, ukkaru Poorna sapidalam
Mahesh: Illa pa, naanga velila saptutu thaan varom
Pazhani: Sari Dr enna sonnanga?
M: Avaluku low BP irukkaam, so electrolyte kudikka solli irukanga, konjam tablets kuduthu irukanga
P: Poorna konjam healthya sapidu ma, Azhagu, Sudha konjam ava nerathuku ozhunga sapidurala illaiyanu note panni avaluku pidicha madiri samachu kudunga
Sudha: Saringa pa, naan paathukiren
Pazhani: Sari neenga rendu perum poi thoongunga
Mahesh and Poorna nodded and went to their room. Both of them changed their clothes and refreshed, went to bed. Mahesh said "Poorna tablets pottudu".
P: Mmm sari
Both of them didn't talk much about anything else and went to sleep.
Ravi was about to finish a call with someone in his room balcony. "Mm sari nee naalaiku avan office-ku poi avana nerla paathu naan sonna madiri sollu, naan avakitta pesa vendiya vidhathula pesikkiren".
He disconnected the call, turned around and saw Sudha in his room putting Appu in his cradle. He got shocked wondering if Sudha heard the conversation.
Sudha: Enna Ravi? Yen apdi paakureenga?
Ravi is relieved and thought "Paravalla, naama pesinatha kekkalannu ninakiren".
S: Ungala thaan kekkuren, enna aachu?
R: Athu onnum illa, just yetho ninachukittu irunthen
S: Mm..yaarkitta pesittu iruntheenga?
R: Yaaru?
S: Neenga thaan yaarkittayo pesittu iruntheengale?
R: Amam, aana nee yen kekkura?
S: Illa.....avakitta naan pesa vendiya vidhathula pesikkiren-nu soneenga, so yaara soneenganu yosichen
Ravi thought "Achacho, kettuta pola irukke, apdiye solra, aana last line mattum thaan ketruppannu ninakiren, illana ivlo coola irukka maata, ippo yethavathu solli samalikkanume"
R: Athu....athu vanthu....
S: Enna Ravi?
R: Illa naan solluven, but nee yaarkittayum kamichuka koodathu, ethuvum kekkavo, pesavo koodathu
S: Enna ivlo build up kudukureenga? Seriousana vishayama? Sari enna-nu thaan sollungalen, appo thaan puriyum
R: Athu Mahesh thaan call panni irunthan
S: Mahesh-a? Ethuku call pannanum? Nerla vanthu pesalame
R: Naama rendu perum oru velai thoongita kadhava thatti disturb panna vendamennu ninachu call panninan
S: Oh ok, enna vishayam?
R: Athu....athu vanthu....
S: Sollunga Ravi, yedhavathu problema? Sonna thaana theriyum
R: Illa naan solli, nee avangakitta poi yedhavathu kettuda koodathu illa
S: Athu thaan naan kekka maatennu solren illa
R: Illa onnum illa, Mahesh innum rendu moonu naal-la Kodaikanal poran illa?
S: Amam, sollitu iruntharu
R: Appave Poornavum kooda poganum solralaam
S: Nalla vishayam thaana?
R: Nalla vishayam thaan, aana avaloda health ippo avlo sari illa, travel panna vendannu Mahesh ninaikiran, apdiye travel panni pona kooda anga avan velaiku poiduvaan, Poornavo paathukavo, help pannavo anga aal irukka maatanga, athanala Poorna konja naalaiku ingaye irukkatum-nu ninakiran
S: Oh, avar yosikarthum sari thaan, one week-ave ava dulla thaan irukka, solla pona mayakkam, low blood pressure, anaemic-nu thaan irukku, inga-na naanum, ammavum avaluku healthya yedhavathu senju kuduthu paathupom, anga pona kashtam thaan
R: Correct, athaan Mahesh enakku call panni feel panninan, sari nee vidu, naan sonna Poorna keppa, naan avakitta pesura vidhathula pesi avala konja naalaikku ingaye irukka solrennu sonnen
S: Aana Mahesh solliye kekkalanna, neenga sonna epdi keppa? Yerkanave unga mela kovama thaan irukka, ithula neenga vera poi nee Mahesh-oda Kodaikanal poga vendannu sonna ava kova pada chance irukku, ungala thappa ninaikka kooda chance irukku
Sudha became concerned.
R: Illa Sudha, ava kovam lam chinna kuzhandainga kovam madiri, ava poranthuthala irunthu naan avala paakuren, avala pathi enakku theriyatha? Evlo naal enmela kovama iruppa? Athellam eppavo ava kovam kuranjiduchu, ippo lam enkitta nalla thaan pesura, nee paakalaiya enna?
S: Naan paakala, evlo naala ungakitta nalla pesura?
R: Hmm konja naalave nalla thaan pesura, ippo athuva mukkiyam?
S: Illa athukilla, just therinjuka ketten
R: Sari sari nee itha pathi avakittayo illa Maheshkittayo, illa vera yaarkittayume ethuvume pesatha, kamichukatha, sariya?
S: Mm sari
Sudha had couple of pillows on her back, stretched her legs in the bed and started to rub her forehead. Ravi went to the other side of the bed and laid down and looked at Sudha being concerned and sad. For some reason, it made him happy.
R: Thoongalaiya Sudha?
S: Illa Ravi, lesa thalaiya valikkura madiri irukku, ungaluku thookam vantha light-a vena off pannitu neenga thoongunga
R: Enakkum sariya thookam varala, but naalaiku neraiya velai irukku, so naan thoonga try panren, neeyum thoongu, good night
Ravi turned off the bedside lamp and started to sleep.
Next day morning, Mahesh got ready to go to the office. Poorna was still sleeping. Once he got dressed up, he came and sat near Poorna.
M: Poorna, Poorna
P: Mmm...
Poorna slightly opened her eyes and saw the light from windows and realized it is late in the morning, she rushed to get up, but Mahesh stopped her. "Paravalla, paravalla nee paduthuko, just unkitta sollitu velaiku kilambalannu ninachen, athaan ezhuppinen, innaiku tablets ellam correcta pottuko, Dr sonnathum nabagam irukkatum, Bedla konja neram ukkanthu stabilize pannitu keezha irangu, athe madiri eppavume ukkanthu ezhunthirukkum pothu konjam nidhanama iru, okva? Electrolyte ellam correcta kudi, chamatha sapidu, annikittayum sollitu poren, sariya?"
Poorna looked pale and tired. "Mm sari"
Mahesh kissed on her forehead and smiled. Poorna looked at him straight through his eyes,
"Sari naan kilamburen, bye" left Mahesh.
Sudha was trying make lemon rice on one side while pouring batter on dosai tawa to make dosa on other side and was trying to line up lunch boxes to pack lunch for Ravi, Mahesh, Kavya and Thiruna.
Everyone was having breakfast. Thiruna called Sudha "Anni, anni, dosai kettu romba neram aachu, ippo thaan dosai maava araikkureengala?"
Azhagu: Hey enna thimira? Ava evlo velai seira? Athaan idly suttu vachirukkulla, atha sapida vendiya thaana?
Thiruna: Ada ennama neenga? Naan yetho puthusa kekkura madiri solreenga? Enakku eppavume murugala nei oothi oru dosai sapta thaan thirupthiya irukkumnu ungalukku theriyatha?
Pazhani: Thappu Thiruna, romba thappu, nammalala onnum help panna mudiyalanna kooda paravalla, veetula irukkavangala ipdi imsai panna koodathu
Thiruna: Ada ponga Pazhani, Sudha anni yaaru? En innoru amma madiri, naan eppo enna kettalum oru smile-oda azhaga senju kudupanga, avangaluku kashtam-na naan keppana?
Meanwhile, Sudha was trying to get rid of the burnt dosa fast and was getting frustrated. Mahesh thought "Anni oru dosai suda ivlo time eduthukka maatangale?". He finished his breakfast and went to the kitchen. He saw Sudha scraping the burnt dosa from the dosa tawa frustratingly and she was sweating profusely.
"Anni, anni irunga, intha side vaanga" asked Mahesh.
Sudha: Illa Mahesh paravalla, itho eduthuduven, oru rendu nimisham kanna thiruppinen, udane theenju poi dosai kallula ottikichu, Thiruna vera wait panran, ungaluku ellam vera lunch pack pannanum, tensionla onnum puriyala
Mahesh: Mudhalla antha dosai karandiya kudunga
He pulled a chair from the kitchen corner and asked her to sit. He switched off the stove that had the kadai to prepare lemon rice.
Sudha: Ayyo Mahesh, yen antha stove-a niruthureenga, lemon rice pannanum
M: Pannalam anni, neenga ukkarunga
S: Illa paravalla....
Mahesh grabbed Sudha's hand and asked her to sit in the chair. He turned a table fan away from the stove and towards Sudha.
M: Neenga konja neram ukkanthu vedikkai mattum paarunga, sariya? Epdi verkka viruvirukka velai senjuttu irukeenga? Poornavukum udambu sari illa, illana avalavathu yedhavathu help pannuva, velaikku oru aal vachukkalannu munnadiye sonnen, neengalum ammavum thaan vendam vendannu solreenga
S: Illa Mahesh, innaiku thaan ennavo ipdi late aagiduchu, onnume puriya matenguthu
M: Paravalla anni, naan ungala ethuvum kurai sollala, neenga rest edukkama ipdi velai seireengalennu thaan kashtama irukku
Mahesh poured lot of salt on to the dosai kal and started to roast it along with the burnt dosa.
S: Mahesh, enna panreenga? Yen ivlo salt?
M: Pcch...neenga vedikkai paarungannu thaana sonnen
Meanwhile, he squeezed two lemons for lemon rice, took one more lemon and squeezed it on to a tumbler.
S: Rendu lemon pothum Mahesh
Mahesh looked at Sudha with fake angry. "Anni....ungakitta enna sonnen"
S: Sari sari naan ethuvum pesala, aana unga annanuku lemon rice pulippa irukkunu kovam vantha enakku theriyathu pa, smiled Sudha.
M: Raviya epdi samalikkarthunu enakku theriyum anni, neenga worry pannatheenga
He mixed a tsp of salt and a tablespoon of sugar into a bowl, brought couple of ice cubes from the freezer and added it to the bowl, added couple of glasses of water and the lemon juice onto it and mixed it well, poured it into a big glass and gave it to Sudha.
S: Enakka?
M: Mmm ungaluku thaan, kudinga
Mahesh smiled and turned to do scrub the dosai kal with salt.
Sudha's eyes became wet. But with the breeze from the table fan and cool lemon juice in her hand made her feel relaxed and refreshing. She don't have words to thank Mahesh. A small nice gesture like this which she never expected and never experienced after marrying Ravi made her so happy. She took one sip from the lemon juice and said "Mmm paravallaye Mahesh, lemon juice kooda ivlo taste-a panna mudiyum-nu neenga pottu kudutha juice kudicha piragu thaan theriyuthu, thanks".
M: Pchh....ethukku anni thanks ellam sollikittu
He scrubbed off the burnt dosa and washed it off and put it back on the stove, turned on the stove and put it on high flame for couple of mins to fasten the process. In other stove, he tempered mustard seeds, urad dal, some peanuts, curry leaves, chillies for lemon rice, then added the rice mixed with turmeric powder, salt and lemon juice and stirred it well and turned off the stove. Meanwhile, he reduced the flame on other stove and made a dosa.
Sudha was trying to get up. "Kudunga Mahesh, naan poi Thirunavuku kudukkiren"
"Neenga ukkarunga, naan poi kuduthutu varen, neenga ippo ethuvum seiyya vendam"
Mahesh brought the dosai to Thiruna.
Thiruna: Hey ennada, nee eduthutu vara, anni enga?
M: Yaar eduthutu vantha enna? Anni lunch pack pannitu irukanga, athaan naan eduthutu vanthen, nee sapidu
Thiruna: Athaana? Yaar eduthutu vantha enna? Enakku thevai murugalana dosai, thanks bro, aana ivlo neram aagum nu naan edir paakala
M: Next time nee enga ellarukkum dosai suttu thara, evlo neram nee eduthukkirenu naan check pannanum
Thiruna: Ponga bro comedy pannikittu
M: Hey loosu, comedy ellam pannala, amma innaiku night tiffin enna?
Azhagu: Mmm kalaila idly saptachu, so night dosai thaan
M: Ok apram enna? Innaiku night nee thaan enga ellarukkum dosai suttu thara
Thiruna: Hey enna comedy panrannu ninacha, nijamave intha velaiya en thalaila kattiduva pola irukke
M: Nijamave nee thaan seira
Mahesh playfully rubbed Thiruna's hair and left to kitchen.
Thiruna: Enna ma ivan, ipdi sollitu poraan? Ennala ellam panna mudiyathu
Pazhani: Yenda panna mudiyathu? Ithenna periya kamba soothirama? Dosai thaana? Paravalla paravalla, innaiku night neeye pannu
Thiruna: Ammaaa.....
Azhagu: Amam da, innaiku oru naal nee pannu, un kaiyala thaan naan innum ethuvume saptathu illa
Kavya: Hmm Thirunavuku punishmenta, illa namakellam Mahesh anna punishment kuduthirukaana-nu puriyala
Sudha was packing the lunch boxes with lemon rice and pickles.
"Anni ungala rest edukka thaana sonnen?"
"Illa paravalla Mahesh, naan bettera feel panren, athaan naane pack panna arambichuten"
"Mmm sari, anni mathiyam neenga ethuvum samaikka vendam, ungaluku, ammavuku Poornavuku naan order panniduren, neenga rest edunga"
"Athellam ethuku Mahesh, naan nalla thaan irukken, naane senjiduven"
"Illa anni, enna thaan Poorna help panninalum, main-a neenga thaan ellathaiyum izhuthu pottu seireenga, enga thevai ellam purinju seireenga, but naanga yaarum athai pathi yosikkarthe illa, naane adikadi Poornavuku lesa udambu mudiyalanna kooda avala velai seiyya vidurathu illa, athoda illama Poornava paathukanganu coola ungakitta sollitu kilambiduren, neengalum athe madiri paathukureenga, innaiku kooda casuala Poornava paathukangannu sollitu kilambi iruppen, aana ungala verkka viruvirukka frustratinga kitchenla paathapo thaan enakke naanga panra thappu purinjuthu"
"Pcchh...enna Mahesh neenga? naan yaaru? Intha veetu marumaga thaana? Naan ungalukku ellam paathu paathu seirathula evlo santhosha paduren theriyuma? Poorna enkitta kalakalannu pesa maatale thavira naan adhigama velai seiyya vida maata, kovama thittiyavathu avale izhuthu pottu seiva, neengalum sari, avalum sari eppavume enna considerate-a thaan paathukureenga, so neenga ethuvum feel pannatheenga, santhoshama velaiku poitu vaanga"
"Mm thanks anni, but nabagam irukkattum, mathiyam sapadu veetuku vanthudum....Shhh....neenga ethuvum pesa vendam, naan varen, bye" left Mahesh.
Sudha felt so happy to be recognized by Mahesh for all her efforts at house keeping.
S: "Poorna ezhunthiri"
Poorna woke up and got surprised to see Sudha brought her lunch. "Yen Sudha, naan keezha vanthu saptuka maatena? Enakku mattum ethuku intha special treatment?"
S: "Special treatment ellam onnum illa, chumma bore adichuthu enakku, athaan unkooda pesilannu vanthen, lunch time ngarthala unakku lunch-um eduthutu vanthen"
Poorna thought this is the first time Sudha came to her room to spend some time with her.
P: "Sari ukkaru"
S: "TV la enna odittu irukku?"
P: "Chumma lifehacks paathutu irunthen apdiye thoongiten"
S: "Enna channel ithu?"
P: "Ithu youtube, chromecast-la tv yoda connect panni paakuren"
S: "Oh apdi lam irukka? Enakku theriyathu, sari nee sapidu"
P: "Enakku actuala soup saptathukkapuram pasiye illa Sudha, naan apram saptukiren"
S: "Unakku pasi edukka thaan antha soup, ippo sapidu, naan amma, yen Appu kooda saptutan, nee thaan innum sapidala"
Poorna thought to herself "Sapidalana vida maata pola irukku". Poorna started to eat the food unwillingly. Sudha accompanied her by talking some random topics to make sure that she finishes her meal. After Poorna had her lunch, Sudha and Poorna were talking for 15 mins or so about a tv show, then Sudha left her to take rest.
Mahesh returned from work around 4pm and saw Poorna sleeping. He tried to wake her up. "Poorna, Poorna..."
"Mmm..." responded Poorna.
"Ezhunthiri, ezhunthiri...." Mahesh pulled the blanket and switched off the ac in an effort to wake up Poorna.
Poorna opened her eyes half and mumbled "Enna Mahesh, thoonga vida mateengala?"
M: "Mmhmmm vida maten, ezhunthirichu kilambu, Dr kitta poganum"
P: "Ethuku? Enakku thaan onnum illaiye?"
M: "Athai Dr sollatum, nee kilambu da"
P: "Oru chinna thalai suthaluku poi yen ipdi aarbattam panreenga?"
M: "Oii.....en pondattikku onnuna naan arbattam pannama vera yaar pannuva?"
Poorna got up and looked at him. "Enmela ivlo anbu irukka ungalukku?"
M: "Ithenna kelvi? illaiya pinna?"
P: "Aana enkitta opena pesa matengureengale?"
Mahesh got frustrated and sighed. "Poorna oru thadavai sonna unakku puriyatha?
P: "Apdi enna perusa solliteenga? Issues irukku-nu soneenga, aana athu ennanu mattum enkitta solla mateenga? Apram ethukku naan oruthi wife-nu inga ukkanthiruken, ungaluku sapadu katti kudukkavum, ungalukku aasai vantha......" Poorna slowed down seeing Mahesh getting angry.
Mahesh got away from her and went to balcony. His left hand is on his waist, his right hand rubbing his forehead. Its obvious for Poorna that he is angry and tensed. She regretted starting the argument with him when he came from office to take her to the hospital. She felt she could have waited as he asked her to or if not, she could have waited until they return from the hospital.
She got up and refreshed herself, combed her hair and looked at Mahesh. He is sitting in a chair in the balcony. He joined his hands together and rested his head on his hands. "Ayyo paavam romba tensiona irukkaru polave, apdina enkitta share pannalam thaana? Ethuva irunthalum pesina konjam reliefa irukkum thaana?" thought Poorna. When she got up from the dressing table chair, she started to feel dizzy. She caught hold of the chair and made sure she doesn't fall.
She went to him slowly and said "Naan ready".
Mahesh didn't turn to see her for couple of minutes. Then he looked at her and got up. She followed him. He turned around and told her "Ingaye wait pannu, naan poi anniya ready aaga solren".
Poorna became confused "Ethukku?"
"Anniyoda hospital poitu vaa" said Mahesh.
Tears started to gather in the corner of Poorna's eyes, but she controlled herself and said "Apdina naan pogala".
M: "Yen?"
P: "Neenga thaana kooptutu porenu soneenga, neengale kootitu ponga"
M: "Enakku tireda irukku, nee anniyodaye poitu vaa"
Poorna became angry and started to remove the pin from her saree from her shoulder and started to unwrap her saree.
Mahesh grabbed her hand and stopped her from removing her saree and asked "Ippo yen sareeya ellam kazhattura?"
P: "Athu thaan neenga kooptutu poga matennu solliteenga illa? Naan vera yedhavathu casual saree kattikuren"
M: "Apdina anniyoda poitu vara maata?"
P: "Mmhmm maaten"
Mahesh sighed and said "Vanthu tholai".
P: "Enna soneenga? Vanthu tholaiya? Ennai paatha avlo ilakkarama poiducha ungalukku?"
M: "Nee mattum ennai paathu enna sonna?"
P: "Enna sonnen?"
M: "Athukulla maranthutiya? Athaana, pesarthukku munnadi 10 thadava yosichu pesurvangaluku naama enna pesinonnu nabagam irukkum, yosikkama pesuravangaluku ipdi thaan pattu pattunu maranthu poidum, enakku aasai varum pothu ellam theethukkava wife-nu thaana kekka vantha nee?"
Poorna lowered her eyes.
M: "Sollu, sonniya illaiya? Vanthu tholai-nu sonnale unakku ivlo kovam varuthe, chance kidaikkum pothellam aasaiku varen, alpa thanama panrenu solriye, enakku evlo hurt aagum? Inimel ipdiye vachuko, aasaiku thaan varen, en wife thaana nee? en anbu ellam theriyala illa unakku? en aasai mattum thaana theriyuthu? So apdiye vachuko, naan aasaikku thaan varen, enna thappu? Ishtam-na neeyum enjoy pannu, illana vendam sollu, pothuma? santhoshama?" Mahesh yelled at her face.
Tears rolled down through Poorna's cheeks.
M: "Cha, naanum kova pada koodathu, kova pada koodathunnu paakuren, aana nee vitta thaana? Tho...azha arambichita illa? Azhu, athuku mattum readya water tank vachiru kannulaye, innaiku hospital poitu unkooda velila saptutu jollya time spend pannalannu seekiram vanthen illa, enakku ithu thevai thaan" Mahesh sat down on the bed in tension.
Poorna started to weep and went to the other side of the bed, sat and cried. Nearly 30 mins would have gone. Mahesh got up and looked at her angrily and started to unbutton his shirt. Poorna went to him and got hold of his hand and stopped him from unbuttoning his shirt. "Sorry" she said.
M: "Pchh...kaiya vidu Poorna, un sorry ellam neeye vachuko" Mahesh continued to unbutton his shirt.
Poorna didn't free his hand.
Mahesh mobile rang. Both of them looked at the mobile which was on the bed. Poorna saw the number and knew it is that girl's number. She freed Mahesh's hand, Mahesh took his mobile, disconnected the call and switched off the mobile. He looked at Poorna who was facing away from him.
M: "Ippo hospital polama vendama?"
P: "Ungaluku call vanthuche, pesalaya?"
M: "Pesala, hospital variya varalaiya?"
Poorna was silent for couple of minutes and adjusted her saree fleet, took her hand bag and said "mm pogalam".
Poorna usually hold Mahesh's shoulder or hip when they travel in the bike, but today she didn't even touch him. Mahesh is also not yearning for her touch, he is still hurt by her words. They reached the hospital, got the appointment which had 30 mins of waiting time approximately. Both of them were sitting in silent for a while. Then Mahesh asked "unakku tea yedhavathu vangittu varava?"
P: Vendam
Mahesh didn't bother her after she said no. He was walking back and forth in the hospital corridor. When Poorna's token number came up, Mahesh joined her.
Dr: Sollunga enna problem?
P: Konjam dizzya irukku Dr
M: Nethu evening romba neram kitchenla work pannitu iruntha, apram thideernu romba sweat aaga arambichiduchu, breathing ellam fast and shallowa irunthuchu, apram apdiye mayakkam pottu vizhunthutta
Dr: Ithuku munnadi ipdi irunthirukka?
P: Illa Dr
M: Konja naal munnadi anaemic a iruntha, but ipdi mayakkam vanthathilla
Dr: Intha two days a thaan ipdi dizzya irukka?
M: Amam Dr
P: Illa Dr, last 10 daysave light headeda irukkum
Mahesh was surprised to hear that. He thought to himself "Cha work tension, intha Manthra issue-nala Poornavuku 10 daysa dizzya irukkartha kooda gavanikkala".
Dr checked Poorna's blood pressure and heart beat and said "BP low-a irukku ma, heart palpitation vera irukku, oru blood test eduthudalam, yenna anaemic-a irunthangannu solreenga, so blood cell count paathudalam, tablets ezhuthi tharen, baby-ku try panreengala?"
Mahesh and Poorna both got taken by that question and looked at each other and didn't know what to say. Poorna lowered her eyes.
Mahesh looked at her and started to speak up. "Athu, naan Kodaikanal-a work panren Dr, so we don't try actively, but we don't use any protection when we do have sex".
Dr: Mmm...eppo ma lasta un period vanthuchu?
Mahesh became curious to know the reason behind the question.
Poorna hesitated a bit as she and Mahesh never talked about these kind of things and haven't even shared time with him when she got her periods. In the first few months of their marriage, as they didn't become close, they didn't get to talk about these things, then later on although they became intimate, Mahesh was in Kodaikanal most of the time.
Mahesh nudged her and encouraged her to speak up.
Dr: Mm sollu ma, regulara varum thaana? Illa irregular periodsa?
P: Athu....marriage munnadi regulara thaan Dr irunthuchu, mostly 28-30 daysla vanthudum, but marriage ku apram irregulara irukku, sometimes 40 days kooda aagum, lasta eppo vanthuchunnu naan maranthuten
Dr: Athellam correcta note pannanum ma, neenga active-a try pannalannalum kooda protection use panrathu illanu solreenga, so baby form aaga chance irukku, periods vera irregular solreenga, so ethanala thalli poi irukkunu guess panrathu ungaluku kashtam aagidum, neenga anaemic-a irukka chance irukkarthala suppose baby conceive aana it is a risk for both the fetus and you. So inimel period correcta date note pannikonga, healthya sapidunga, ippo oru urine test pannidalam conceive aagi irukeengalannu check panrathuku.
Dr started to write the tests name. Mahesh's face became bright and Poorna noticed it. "Enna ithu? Mayakkam-nu vantha Dr ithellam solranga, oru velai naan conceive aagi iruppena?" Poorna blushed and she felt butterflies in her stomach.
Dr: Itha velila irukka labla kudunga, they will give you container for the urine test. Apram blood test kum ezhuthi irukken, urine test kuduthutu wait pannunga, I'll call you.
M: Mmm ok Dr
Poorna could see the brightness in Mahesh's face. "Oru velai conceive-a irukkomunu sonnathuke ipdi 1000 volts bulb eriyuthe avar mugathula? But apdi conceive aagi irukka chance irukkuma?"
Lab Technician: Madam restroom intha side irukku
Poorna got the container for the urine test. Once she gave the urine and blood for the tests, she sat next to Mahesh. They didn't speak with each other.
Mahesh took the water bottle and offered it to her. "Thanni kudikiriya?"
"Mmm kudunga"
Dr called them both. Both of them were curious and nervous about the result.
Dr: Pregnancy test negative thaan ma, but unakku date vera theriyala-nu solra, so ethukum nee konjam care eduthuko, innum one week la period varalanna thirumba oru test eduthukalam, home test kooda pannikalam neenga, anyhow, bp-ku tablets ezhuthi irukken, neraiya thanni kudikanum, electrolytes kudikkanum, thoongi ezhunthirikkum pothu konjam slow-a ukkanthu, slow-a ezhunthu nikkanum, low bp irukkum pothu avasaram avasaram-nu bed-a vittu ezhunthirikka koodathu, anaemic-a irukeengalanu blood test result vantha piragu theriyum, then I will prescribe you for that if needed. Stress irukka ma unakku? Stress illama irukkanum, athanala kooda periods irregulara irukka chance irukku. Eat healthy, do some exercises or yoga. It will help to regularize your periods. Both of you are young, so lifestyle habits sari panninale you have good chance to become pregnant. Okva?
Dr smiled.
M: Thanks Dr
P: Thanks Dr
Poorna was bit upset. Mahesh bought the tablets from the pharmacy. Mahesh took Poorna to a little restaurant around the corner.
M: Enna sapidura?
P: Enakku avlova pasikala
M: Paravalla sapidu, first oru soup kudi, mathathu apram order pannikalam
Mahesh ordered soup for both of them.
M: Yen ippo dulla irukka?
P: Onnum illa
M: Paravalla sollu
P: Pregnancy test negative-a vanthathula ungaluku kashtama illaiya?
M: Dr kitta vara varaikkum naama itha pathi perusa ethuvum plan pannavo, pesavo illaiye, just to be safe, Dr test edukka sonnanga, avlo thaan, ithuku ethuku upset aaganum?
But Poorna couldn't be cool like Mahesh. Yes he is right that they never talked about baby and all, but the feeling she felt when Dr suggested to take a test is something she had never felt in her life. It stirred something into her. Mahesh didn't disturb her run of thoughts by chatting, he let her to be in her thoughts. Once they had the soup, Mahesh asked what she would like to eat. She is not interested in eating anything. But Mahesh insisted that she should. So she had idly and medhu vada while Mahesh had dosa.
Both of them didn't talk much on their way back. They reached the home and everyone was having dinner.
Pazhani: Vaa Mahesh, ukkaru Poorna sapidalam
Mahesh: Illa pa, naanga velila saptutu thaan varom
Pazhani: Sari Dr enna sonnanga?
M: Avaluku low BP irukkaam, so electrolyte kudikka solli irukanga, konjam tablets kuduthu irukanga
P: Poorna konjam healthya sapidu ma, Azhagu, Sudha konjam ava nerathuku ozhunga sapidurala illaiyanu note panni avaluku pidicha madiri samachu kudunga
Sudha: Saringa pa, naan paathukiren
Pazhani: Sari neenga rendu perum poi thoongunga
Mahesh and Poorna nodded and went to their room. Both of them changed their clothes and refreshed, went to bed. Mahesh said "Poorna tablets pottudu".
P: Mmm sari
Both of them didn't talk much about anything else and went to sleep.
Ravi was about to finish a call with someone in his room balcony. "Mm sari nee naalaiku avan office-ku poi avana nerla paathu naan sonna madiri sollu, naan avakitta pesa vendiya vidhathula pesikkiren".
He disconnected the call, turned around and saw Sudha in his room putting Appu in his cradle. He got shocked wondering if Sudha heard the conversation.
Sudha: Enna Ravi? Yen apdi paakureenga?
Ravi is relieved and thought "Paravalla, naama pesinatha kekkalannu ninakiren".
S: Ungala thaan kekkuren, enna aachu?
R: Athu onnum illa, just yetho ninachukittu irunthen
S: Mm..yaarkitta pesittu iruntheenga?
R: Yaaru?
S: Neenga thaan yaarkittayo pesittu iruntheengale?
R: Amam, aana nee yen kekkura?
S: Illa.....avakitta naan pesa vendiya vidhathula pesikkiren-nu soneenga, so yaara soneenganu yosichen
Ravi thought "Achacho, kettuta pola irukke, apdiye solra, aana last line mattum thaan ketruppannu ninakiren, illana ivlo coola irukka maata, ippo yethavathu solli samalikkanume"
R: Athu....athu vanthu....
S: Enna Ravi?
R: Illa naan solluven, but nee yaarkittayum kamichuka koodathu, ethuvum kekkavo, pesavo koodathu
S: Enna ivlo build up kudukureenga? Seriousana vishayama? Sari enna-nu thaan sollungalen, appo thaan puriyum
R: Athu Mahesh thaan call panni irunthan
S: Mahesh-a? Ethuku call pannanum? Nerla vanthu pesalame
R: Naama rendu perum oru velai thoongita kadhava thatti disturb panna vendamennu ninachu call panninan
S: Oh ok, enna vishayam?
R: Athu....athu vanthu....
S: Sollunga Ravi, yedhavathu problema? Sonna thaana theriyum
R: Illa naan solli, nee avangakitta poi yedhavathu kettuda koodathu illa
S: Athu thaan naan kekka maatennu solren illa
R: Illa onnum illa, Mahesh innum rendu moonu naal-la Kodaikanal poran illa?
S: Amam, sollitu iruntharu
R: Appave Poornavum kooda poganum solralaam
S: Nalla vishayam thaana?
R: Nalla vishayam thaan, aana avaloda health ippo avlo sari illa, travel panna vendannu Mahesh ninaikiran, apdiye travel panni pona kooda anga avan velaiku poiduvaan, Poornavo paathukavo, help pannavo anga aal irukka maatanga, athanala Poorna konja naalaiku ingaye irukkatum-nu ninakiran
S: Oh, avar yosikarthum sari thaan, one week-ave ava dulla thaan irukka, solla pona mayakkam, low blood pressure, anaemic-nu thaan irukku, inga-na naanum, ammavum avaluku healthya yedhavathu senju kuduthu paathupom, anga pona kashtam thaan
R: Correct, athaan Mahesh enakku call panni feel panninan, sari nee vidu, naan sonna Poorna keppa, naan avakitta pesura vidhathula pesi avala konja naalaikku ingaye irukka solrennu sonnen
S: Aana Mahesh solliye kekkalanna, neenga sonna epdi keppa? Yerkanave unga mela kovama thaan irukka, ithula neenga vera poi nee Mahesh-oda Kodaikanal poga vendannu sonna ava kova pada chance irukku, ungala thappa ninaikka kooda chance irukku
Sudha became concerned.
R: Illa Sudha, ava kovam lam chinna kuzhandainga kovam madiri, ava poranthuthala irunthu naan avala paakuren, avala pathi enakku theriyatha? Evlo naal enmela kovama iruppa? Athellam eppavo ava kovam kuranjiduchu, ippo lam enkitta nalla thaan pesura, nee paakalaiya enna?
S: Naan paakala, evlo naala ungakitta nalla pesura?
R: Hmm konja naalave nalla thaan pesura, ippo athuva mukkiyam?
S: Illa athukilla, just therinjuka ketten
R: Sari sari nee itha pathi avakittayo illa Maheshkittayo, illa vera yaarkittayume ethuvume pesatha, kamichukatha, sariya?
S: Mm sari
Sudha had couple of pillows on her back, stretched her legs in the bed and started to rub her forehead. Ravi went to the other side of the bed and laid down and looked at Sudha being concerned and sad. For some reason, it made him happy.
R: Thoongalaiya Sudha?
S: Illa Ravi, lesa thalaiya valikkura madiri irukku, ungaluku thookam vantha light-a vena off pannitu neenga thoongunga
R: Enakkum sariya thookam varala, but naalaiku neraiya velai irukku, so naan thoonga try panren, neeyum thoongu, good night
Ravi turned off the bedside lamp and started to sleep.
Next day morning, Mahesh got ready to go to the office. Poorna was still sleeping. Once he got dressed up, he came and sat near Poorna.
M: Poorna, Poorna
P: Mmm...
Poorna slightly opened her eyes and saw the light from windows and realized it is late in the morning, she rushed to get up, but Mahesh stopped her. "Paravalla, paravalla nee paduthuko, just unkitta sollitu velaiku kilambalannu ninachen, athaan ezhuppinen, innaiku tablets ellam correcta pottuko, Dr sonnathum nabagam irukkatum, Bedla konja neram ukkanthu stabilize pannitu keezha irangu, athe madiri eppavume ukkanthu ezhunthirukkum pothu konjam nidhanama iru, okva? Electrolyte ellam correcta kudi, chamatha sapidu, annikittayum sollitu poren, sariya?"
Poorna looked pale and tired. "Mm sari"
Mahesh kissed on her forehead and smiled. Poorna looked at him straight through his eyes,
"Sari naan kilamburen, bye" left Mahesh.
Sudha was trying make lemon rice on one side while pouring batter on dosai tawa to make dosa on other side and was trying to line up lunch boxes to pack lunch for Ravi, Mahesh, Kavya and Thiruna.
Everyone was having breakfast. Thiruna called Sudha "Anni, anni, dosai kettu romba neram aachu, ippo thaan dosai maava araikkureengala?"
Azhagu: Hey enna thimira? Ava evlo velai seira? Athaan idly suttu vachirukkulla, atha sapida vendiya thaana?
Thiruna: Ada ennama neenga? Naan yetho puthusa kekkura madiri solreenga? Enakku eppavume murugala nei oothi oru dosai sapta thaan thirupthiya irukkumnu ungalukku theriyatha?
Pazhani: Thappu Thiruna, romba thappu, nammalala onnum help panna mudiyalanna kooda paravalla, veetula irukkavangala ipdi imsai panna koodathu
Thiruna: Ada ponga Pazhani, Sudha anni yaaru? En innoru amma madiri, naan eppo enna kettalum oru smile-oda azhaga senju kudupanga, avangaluku kashtam-na naan keppana?
Meanwhile, Sudha was trying to get rid of the burnt dosa fast and was getting frustrated. Mahesh thought "Anni oru dosai suda ivlo time eduthukka maatangale?". He finished his breakfast and went to the kitchen. He saw Sudha scraping the burnt dosa from the dosa tawa frustratingly and she was sweating profusely.
"Anni, anni irunga, intha side vaanga" asked Mahesh.
Sudha: Illa Mahesh paravalla, itho eduthuduven, oru rendu nimisham kanna thiruppinen, udane theenju poi dosai kallula ottikichu, Thiruna vera wait panran, ungaluku ellam vera lunch pack pannanum, tensionla onnum puriyala
Mahesh: Mudhalla antha dosai karandiya kudunga
He pulled a chair from the kitchen corner and asked her to sit. He switched off the stove that had the kadai to prepare lemon rice.
Sudha: Ayyo Mahesh, yen antha stove-a niruthureenga, lemon rice pannanum
M: Pannalam anni, neenga ukkarunga
S: Illa paravalla....
Mahesh grabbed Sudha's hand and asked her to sit in the chair. He turned a table fan away from the stove and towards Sudha.
M: Neenga konja neram ukkanthu vedikkai mattum paarunga, sariya? Epdi verkka viruvirukka velai senjuttu irukeenga? Poornavukum udambu sari illa, illana avalavathu yedhavathu help pannuva, velaikku oru aal vachukkalannu munnadiye sonnen, neengalum ammavum thaan vendam vendannu solreenga
S: Illa Mahesh, innaiku thaan ennavo ipdi late aagiduchu, onnume puriya matenguthu
M: Paravalla anni, naan ungala ethuvum kurai sollala, neenga rest edukkama ipdi velai seireengalennu thaan kashtama irukku
Mahesh poured lot of salt on to the dosai kal and started to roast it along with the burnt dosa.
S: Mahesh, enna panreenga? Yen ivlo salt?
M: Pcch...neenga vedikkai paarungannu thaana sonnen
Meanwhile, he squeezed two lemons for lemon rice, took one more lemon and squeezed it on to a tumbler.
S: Rendu lemon pothum Mahesh
Mahesh looked at Sudha with fake angry. "Anni....ungakitta enna sonnen"
S: Sari sari naan ethuvum pesala, aana unga annanuku lemon rice pulippa irukkunu kovam vantha enakku theriyathu pa, smiled Sudha.
M: Raviya epdi samalikkarthunu enakku theriyum anni, neenga worry pannatheenga
He mixed a tsp of salt and a tablespoon of sugar into a bowl, brought couple of ice cubes from the freezer and added it to the bowl, added couple of glasses of water and the lemon juice onto it and mixed it well, poured it into a big glass and gave it to Sudha.
S: Enakka?
M: Mmm ungaluku thaan, kudinga
Mahesh smiled and turned to do scrub the dosai kal with salt.
Sudha's eyes became wet. But with the breeze from the table fan and cool lemon juice in her hand made her feel relaxed and refreshing. She don't have words to thank Mahesh. A small nice gesture like this which she never expected and never experienced after marrying Ravi made her so happy. She took one sip from the lemon juice and said "Mmm paravallaye Mahesh, lemon juice kooda ivlo taste-a panna mudiyum-nu neenga pottu kudutha juice kudicha piragu thaan theriyuthu, thanks".
M: Pchh....ethukku anni thanks ellam sollikittu
He scrubbed off the burnt dosa and washed it off and put it back on the stove, turned on the stove and put it on high flame for couple of mins to fasten the process. In other stove, he tempered mustard seeds, urad dal, some peanuts, curry leaves, chillies for lemon rice, then added the rice mixed with turmeric powder, salt and lemon juice and stirred it well and turned off the stove. Meanwhile, he reduced the flame on other stove and made a dosa.
Sudha was trying to get up. "Kudunga Mahesh, naan poi Thirunavuku kudukkiren"
"Neenga ukkarunga, naan poi kuduthutu varen, neenga ippo ethuvum seiyya vendam"
Mahesh brought the dosai to Thiruna.
Thiruna: Hey ennada, nee eduthutu vara, anni enga?
M: Yaar eduthutu vantha enna? Anni lunch pack pannitu irukanga, athaan naan eduthutu vanthen, nee sapidu
Thiruna: Athaana? Yaar eduthutu vantha enna? Enakku thevai murugalana dosai, thanks bro, aana ivlo neram aagum nu naan edir paakala
M: Next time nee enga ellarukkum dosai suttu thara, evlo neram nee eduthukkirenu naan check pannanum
Thiruna: Ponga bro comedy pannikittu
M: Hey loosu, comedy ellam pannala, amma innaiku night tiffin enna?
Azhagu: Mmm kalaila idly saptachu, so night dosai thaan
M: Ok apram enna? Innaiku night nee thaan enga ellarukkum dosai suttu thara
Thiruna: Hey enna comedy panrannu ninacha, nijamave intha velaiya en thalaila kattiduva pola irukke
M: Nijamave nee thaan seira
Mahesh playfully rubbed Thiruna's hair and left to kitchen.
Thiruna: Enna ma ivan, ipdi sollitu poraan? Ennala ellam panna mudiyathu
Pazhani: Yenda panna mudiyathu? Ithenna periya kamba soothirama? Dosai thaana? Paravalla paravalla, innaiku night neeye pannu
Thiruna: Ammaaa.....
Azhagu: Amam da, innaiku oru naal nee pannu, un kaiyala thaan naan innum ethuvume saptathu illa
Kavya: Hmm Thirunavuku punishmenta, illa namakellam Mahesh anna punishment kuduthirukaana-nu puriyala
Sudha was packing the lunch boxes with lemon rice and pickles.
"Anni ungala rest edukka thaana sonnen?"
"Illa paravalla Mahesh, naan bettera feel panren, athaan naane pack panna arambichuten"
"Mmm sari, anni mathiyam neenga ethuvum samaikka vendam, ungaluku, ammavuku Poornavuku naan order panniduren, neenga rest edunga"
"Athellam ethuku Mahesh, naan nalla thaan irukken, naane senjiduven"
"Illa anni, enna thaan Poorna help panninalum, main-a neenga thaan ellathaiyum izhuthu pottu seireenga, enga thevai ellam purinju seireenga, but naanga yaarum athai pathi yosikkarthe illa, naane adikadi Poornavuku lesa udambu mudiyalanna kooda avala velai seiyya vidurathu illa, athoda illama Poornava paathukanganu coola ungakitta sollitu kilambiduren, neengalum athe madiri paathukureenga, innaiku kooda casuala Poornava paathukangannu sollitu kilambi iruppen, aana ungala verkka viruvirukka frustratinga kitchenla paathapo thaan enakke naanga panra thappu purinjuthu"
"Pcchh...enna Mahesh neenga? naan yaaru? Intha veetu marumaga thaana? Naan ungalukku ellam paathu paathu seirathula evlo santhosha paduren theriyuma? Poorna enkitta kalakalannu pesa maatale thavira naan adhigama velai seiyya vida maata, kovama thittiyavathu avale izhuthu pottu seiva, neengalum sari, avalum sari eppavume enna considerate-a thaan paathukureenga, so neenga ethuvum feel pannatheenga, santhoshama velaiku poitu vaanga"
"Mm thanks anni, but nabagam irukkattum, mathiyam sapadu veetuku vanthudum....Shhh....neenga ethuvum pesa vendam, naan varen, bye" left Mahesh.
Sudha felt so happy to be recognized by Mahesh for all her efforts at house keeping.
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