Azhagu serial - Magesh - Poorna fan fiction - Episode 38 - 09/11/2018
Magesh gave lift to Ravi to home. Ravi said "Magesh, yethavathu oru cafe-la vidu da, poi oru nalla coffee, tea yedhavathu kudichutu evening snacks saptutu veetuku pogalam."
Magesh said "Hey, veetuku pona anni, amma-ve yedhavathu supera snacks senju vachirupeenga, veetuku poi saptukalame."
"Pcch...solren illa, nee velila irunthu vanthathala veetula sapidanunu thonuthu, enakku veetula saptu saptu bore adikuthu, unkooda pesi vera romba naal aachu"
"Athukilla Ravi, veetula ellarum namakkaga wait pannitu iruppanga, athaan...." Magesh was hesitating.
"Ok da, unakku enkooda time spend panna viruppam illana veetuke pogalam" said Ravi in a sad voice.
"Apdi ellam illa Ravi, sari vaa, naama coffee saptute pogalam" Magesh rode his bike to a cafe.
They ordered coffee and some snacks like bonda, vadai with chutney.
Ravi started "Apram sollu da, work ellam epdi poitrukku? Project pathi sollu"
"Paravalla Ravi, office set up pannanum, reservoir katturathula irukka paper work paakave neraiya pera recruit pannanum first, athukku office set pannina thaan velai odum. Apram work start pannum pothu employees thanga, vaikkanu neriaya yerpaadugal panna vendi irukku, mudinja alavu office employees mattum thaan veli oorula irunthu kootitu pora madiri irukkum, meedhi per ellam local people thaan, appo thaan avanga thanga naama idam kanduppidikka thevai illa, so ipdi pala thought process, atha execute panrathu, ithukellam thaan engala anuppi irukanga first, so ok, ellam nalla thaan poitrukku."
"Good, good to hear da, apdina seekirama Poornava kootitu thani kudithanam poiduvanu sollu?"
"Illa Ravi, athai pathi ellam innum yosikkala"
"Yen da? Rendu perum santhoshama thaana irukeenga?"
Magesh paused for a second and thought "Ithellam ivan kitta pesalama, ennanu kooda teriyalaye? Ivan nallathukkunu ninachu ketta kooda, naan normala badhil sonna kooda, naanga ippadi discuss panrathu Poorna kaadhuku pochuna enna ninapanu teriyalaye?"
Ravi interrupted Magesh's thinking "Enna da romba yosikkira? Apdina santhoshama illaiya? Ninachen da"
"Enna da ninacha?" Magesh got confused.
"Poornavuku avlo maturity illa da, unkooda santhoshama iruppanu thonala, apdiye irunthalum athu unmaiyana santhoshama-nu enakku doubta thaan irukku"
Magesh got offended by his remark, but he kept his calm and wanted to know why Ravi would think like this. So he asked "Yen apdi solra?"
"Sorry Magesh, naan ethuvum unna offend pannanunu sollala, yetho thonuchu solliten"
"But athaan yen unakku apdi thonuchunu kekkuren"
"Pin point panni solla mudiyala da, unakke teriyum, enakkum, avalukkumana history. So it is understandable that she will have some hesitations, doubts. Nee thaan konjam purinju nadanthukanum."
"Ravi, ethukku suthi valachu sammantham sammanthamillama pesura? Thideernu naanum avalum santhoshama irukkomanu ketta, ava apdiye santhoshama irunthalum athu unmaiyana santhoshama irukkathunu sonna, athu yen-nu theliva explain pannu"
"Hey nee yenda ivlo tension aagura? Avaloda anba santhegam ellam padatha, inthaa intha vadaiya saptu paaru, nalla irukku"
Magesh looked at Ravi and thought "Ivan pesarthu ethuvum puriyala, but it makes me uneasy, better put a full stop to this conversation."
"Avala naan santhegam ellam padala, padavum maaten, vadai nalla supera thaan irukku, innum oru set order pannalam, unakku vera yethavathu venuma?"
Ravi thought Magesh will kept asking him why he said what he said about Poorna, but looks like he changed the topic. He thought it may not be as easy as he thought to manipulate him, but can't leave each and every second with him to go waste, so he tested the water again. "Itha pathi pesarthuku kashtama thaan irukkum, nee insecure-a feel panrathu enakku puriyuthu, sari ippo itha pathi ellam pesa vendam, naan solrathu enna-na just observe Poorna and give her some time, don't force everything to go fast, avlo thaan".
Magesh again got confused and worried. He thought "Ivan pecha vendannu thallavum mudiyala, nallathunnu eduthukkavum mudiyala, Poornavuku yen time kudu time kudunnu solraan, ethaiyum romba seekiram force pannathannu solran, naan enna force panninen, ok, naan ninachatha vida, naan edir paathatha vida konjam seekiramave naanum Poornavum onnu senthuttom, athu ennavo unmai thaan, but athanala Poorna happy illaingura madiriye pesuran, ivanukku enna teriyum Poornava pathi, oru velai nijamave Poorna pressurized-a feel panraala?"
"Magesh, Magesh, sapidu da" said Ravi in a cool voice.
"Mmm....sapiduren" Magesh mind got so confused, but he didn't want to continue the conversation, so he just kept mum and had the snacks. Both of them reached home around 6.30pm. Poorna became happy to see Magesh, but got worried when she saw Ravi walking behind him. "Rendu perum onna vanthangala?"
Sudha asked Ravi "Enna Ravi, unga bike enga?"
"Bike-la konjam problem Sudha, athaan Magesh enna pick up pannikittaan"
Sudha said "Unga rendu perukkum coffee, tea yedhavathu pottu tharava?"
Magesh said "Illa anni, enakku onnum vendam" and he went upstairs to his room.
Poorna thought Magesh looked bit tired, he didn't make much eye contact with her.
Ravi said "Sudha enakku sooda oru coffee pottu thaayen".
Sudha nodded and went to the kitchen. Ravi after making sure there is no one else, went to Poorna and said "Poorna, Magesh konjam stressed-a irukkan, avana romba disturb pannatha, nee paasam vacha neraiya vaipenu enakku teriyum, un anbaala oruthara suffocate-ye panna vachiduva, oru vagaila athu nalla vishayam thaan, but sometimes it can be overwhelming, so avanuku konjam space and time kudu".
Poorna was getting furious and was about to vent out with anger. But Ravi didn't allow her to speak "Paathiya, un nallathukkagavum, Magesh nallathukagavum thaan solren, udane kovam varuthu unakku, sari enakkenna, po poi avana imsai pannu".
Poorna got confused. "Avar yedhavathu sonnara ungakitta?"
"Particulara ethuvum sollala, but en thambi pathi enakku teriyatha? Konjam vittu kuduthu po-nu thaan solren, nee vena avankitta poi pesi paaru, but avan tension aana apram feel pannatha, avlo than solluven" said Ravi.
Sudha came back with the coffee "Inthanga Ravi coffee, Poorna, Magesh-ku intha sundal eduthutu poi kudu"
Poorna was looking down on the floor, thinking something. "Poorna, unna thaan, intha sundal eduthutu po" Sudha gave the little bowl to her.
"Avar thaan ethuvum vendannu sonnare" Poorna said in a robotic voice.
But Sudha didn't say anything, she put the bowl in Poorna's hand "Mm...po".
Poorna was walking upstairs hesitatingly. "Enna ennavo solraan intha Ravi? Avan solrathula ethu unmai, ethu poi onnume puriyalaye, yetho confuse panna thaan solraanu paatha avaroda mugamum innaiku sari illaiye, ennai ozhunga kooda paakalaye, avarkittayum yedhavathu solli kuzhappi vitrupana? Aana avan kuzhappina ivaru yosikka vendama? Naama rendu perum santhoshama theliva irukkanunu ivar ninakka vendama? Onnume puriyalaye"
She went into the room. Magesh refreshed himself and changed into a casual clothes. When he saw Poorna, he noticed she is looking confused and sad. He did notice her smiling in the downstairs when he arrived. But because of the confused state he was in, he avoided any eye contact with her. But seeing her confused and sad now made him sad as well. She hesitated and was standing near the door.
"Yen Poorna angaye nikkura? Ulla vaa" he said with a smile.
Poorna smiled back and came inside.
"Sundal sapidureengala?"
"Illa da enakku pasikkala, nee saptiya?"
"Illa neenga vantha piragu ungaloda senthu sapidalanu wait pannitu irunthen"
Magesh started to think "Namma mela ivlo anbaa irukka, aana intha Ravi ennadanna ava santhoshama iruntha athu unmaiyanatha irukkathu, ava yetho kattayathinala thaan apdi santhoshama irukka apdingura madiri pesittane". He sighed and sat in the bed, leaned on the headboard, closed his eyes and was thinking for couple of minutes. Poorna stood still, watching him.
He opened his eyes and saw Poorna watching him with concern. He smiled. Poorna asked "Yen oru madiri irukeenga?"
"Apdi ellam onnum illaiye?"
"Illa unga mugame sari illa, udambu yethavathu sari illaiya?" she put the bowl on the top of bedside drawer and touched his forehead and neck. Magesh caught hold of her hand and made her sit opposite to him. "Enakku onnum illa Poorna, naan nalla thaan irukken"
"Poi solreenga, udambu nalla irukkuna, manasula yedhavathu kozhappama?"
"Athellam onnum illa da, just office tension avlo thaan, sari inthaa, intha sundala sapidu"
"Neengalum sapidunga"
"Athaan sonnane, pasikkalanu, nee sapidu"
"Yen pasikkala?"
Magesh didn't want to say about his trip with Ravi to the cafe. He felt it is better he doesn't talk about it. So he tried to manage without revealing full information.
"Evening neraiya snacks sapten, athaan pasikkala"
"Enga sapteenga? Eppo sapteenga?"
"Athu...vanthu en girlfriend kooda office canteenla sapten" Magesh said with a naughty tone.
Poorna got angry and tried to get up and leave.
"Hey loosu, chumma vilayattuku sonnen..." Magesh grabbed Poorna's hand and pulled her towards him. She lost the balance and fell on him.
Magesh hugged her. "Pcchh...vidunga..." Poorna said angrily while trying to relieve herself from Magesh's hold.
"Vida mudiyathu, enna pannuva?" smiled Magesh.
Poorna looked at him angrily and again tried to relieve herself. But she couldn't as Magesh held her tightly. So she started to yell at him, the least she could do to show her anger in this position "Enna ethukku pidichu irukkeenga? Poi unga girlfriendaye pidichukka vendiya thaana?"
"Hmm...nalla idea thaan, aana ippothaiku nee thaana en pakkathula irukka, so naan unnaiye pidichikuren"
Poorna stared at him. "Appo ava pakkathula iruntha, avala pidichipeengala?"
"Amam..."
"Unna...evlo thimiru da unakku?" Poorna banged on his chest with her fist.
"Ayyo...amma...kolraale" Magesh pretended.
"Amam konnuduven, vilayattuku kooda girlfriend, ava, iva-nu sonna nijama konnuduven"
Magesh looked at her with a smile. She also stopped her fight physically and looked at him. Magesh came down to her face. Poorna stopped him "Shh...enna ithu? Maranthuducha?"
"Enna? Un nethila thaan oru kiss pannalannu ninachen, nee enna ninacha?"
Poorna got embarrassed. "Pcchhh...mudhalla vidunga" she relieved herself, Magesh also freed her.
"Ippo sundal venuma? vendama?"
"Inga kudu"
Poorna gave the sundal to him. Magesh took a spoonful of sundal and said "Mmm aaa kaatu, mm kaatu."
He started to feed Poorna. Poorna again asked him "Naan kettathuku neenga badhile sollala" in a low voice.
Magesh smiled and said "Vara vazhiyula Ravi-yoda oru cafela coffee, snacks ellam sapten, athaan pasikkala".
Poorna was silent for few seconds and thought what if Ravi had confused Magesh on few things. But she thought "Cha, avan enna sonna enna? Magesh ippo enkooda evlo anbaa irukkaru, athe madiri naanum avar mela anbaa thaan irukken, apram ethuku Raviya ninachu bayapadanum?" She convinced herself there is nothing to be scared of or worry about.
Magesh asked "Hey enna thinking?"
"Onnum illa" she took the sundal bowl and said "enakaga oru vaai sapidunga". Magesh took the sundal Poorna fed him without refusing.
"Epdi irukku?"
"Supera irukku"
"Naan thaan senjen"
"Mmm paravallaye, apdina unna nambi Kodaikanal kootitu pogalannu solra?"
"Hello ennavo en samayaluku bayanthu thaan kooptutu pogama iruntha madiri solreenga?"
"Illaiya pinna? Nee samaikartha test panrathuku naan thaan kidachana? Un testing ellam ingaye mudichutu varanunu thaan waiting"
Poorna got angry and said "Iru da, Kodaikanal vara thaana poren, anga vanthu unna gavanichukiren"
"Vaa va, unnaiyum neraiya gavanikka vendiyathu irukku, Kodaikanal-la thaan konjam vasathiya gavanikka mudiyum" Magesh said while looking at Poorna's eyes.
Poorna blushed.
The flow of your story is very nice. Please write more frequent sister. Im checking your blog everyday eagerly.
ReplyDeleteHey I've written Episode 40 if you are interested in reading. Sorry for the long delay. I'll try to write regularly from now on.
DeleteSis, please write more frequent. i never fail checking your blog everyday
ReplyDeleteHey Sorry for the long delay. I've written Episode 40 if you are interested in reading.
Deletei just finished reading it. simply superb..keep writing sis
DeleteThank you, sure I'll write.
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